Arata
First My Notebook!! Hello Everyone !!! I'm Arata!!! my kanji is 新(Arata ) Nice to meet you ! よろしくね! I'm a college student. I want to be certified public accountant!!! I'm 21!! I Like so many thing that i can't write everything in this notebook! lol so please ask me !!! By the way, My summer vacation is just around the corner!! Yeahhh! My goal is studying for accountant exams and making good memories with best friends!! thank you for watching this. bye bye :)
Jul 29, 2015 9:43 PM
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First My My First Notebook!!   (In English we put the adjective right before its subject, opposite of Japanese, Korean, Spanish etc.)

Hello Everyone !!!

I'm Arata!!! my kanji is 新(Arata ) Nice to meet you ! よろしくね!
I'm a college student. I want to be certified public accountant!!!
I'm 21!!

I like so many things that I can't write everything them all in this notebook! lol (English doesn't use acronyms like lol or omg in formal texts, but as this is an informal journal it's okay. You always want to relate back to the subject, in this case the "things" you like, so we would refer back to "them all" instead of "everything.")

So please ask me more about them!!! (Once again, refering back to the original subject.)

By the way, my summer vacation is just around the corner!!
Yeahhh!

My goal is to be able to studying for my accountant exams and making good memories with my best friends!! (Just some small grammatical errors, most people will understand what it is saying though.)

Thank you for watching reading this. (Watching is for moving objects/pictures like a movie or soccer game. Reading is for text.)

bye bye :)

(All in all you did a wonderful job on your first go here and I would reccomend that you continue the good work!)

July 29, 2015

First My Notebook!!

Hello Everyone !!!

I'm Arata!!! my kanji is 新(Arata ) Nice to meet you ! よろしくね!
I'm a college student. I want to be certified public accountant!!!
I'm 21!!

I Like so many thing but i can't write everything in this notebook! lol

so please ask me anything !!! ( or: you may ask me anything)

By the way, My summer vacation is just around the corner!!
Yeahhh!

My goal is studying for accountant exams and making good memories with my best friends!!

thank you for reading this.

bye bye :)

July 29, 2015
Hii .. this is ahmed taha .. i am a financial accountant for 10 years until now i am studying accounting If u like contact me.. this is my itaiki account
July 29, 2015
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