“Take a vacation”, Someone Cried ! “Take a vacation”, someone cried ! And I thought, I actually should take a vacation, But Of my life! And go somewhere far, I might have lost myself in t

Elina

“Take a vacation”, Someone Cried ! “Take a vacation”, someone cried ! And I thought, I actually should take a vacation, But Of my life! And go somewhere far, I might have lost myself in this complex maze of life, I should go back Find myself and bring her back to me She might be scared, being lost in nowhere, She might be confused! I wonder, What she is thinking about there, alone! Or, no maybe she is not the one, who is lost, and I am the one! What if I am the one, and she is just enjoying back there, and doesn’t want to come back to me? What if she is enjoying being there, with her dreams, dreams which I have forgotten? What if I am the one who is wandering in these spiritless, crowded streets! Either one! I should go back to me, Talk to me! I should promise her I would take care of her, And tell her how much I missed being with her, Talking to her, And sharing my dreams with her, Singing a song for her! I should go back to me! And Have glass of tea with me, Back behind that window, And listening to song of that tiny bird which has a great sound While staring at those beautiful white roses in my tiny garden! I should go back to me!

Jul 29, 2015 10:29 PM

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“Take a vacation”, Someone Cried !

And I thought,
I actually should take a vacation,
But
from my life!

And go somewhere far,
I might have lost myself in this complex maze of life,
I should go back
Find myself and bring her back to me
She might be scared, being lost in nothingness,
She might be confused!
I wonder,
What she is thinking about there, alone!

Or
no, maybe she is not the one
who is lost,
and I am the one!
What if I am the one, and she is just having fun back there, and doesn’t want to come back to me?
What if she is enjoying being there, with her dreams, dreams which I have forgotten?
What if I am the one who is wandering in these spiritless, crowded streets!
Either one! <em>(Either one?)</em>
I should go back to myself,
Talk to myself!

I should promise her I will take care of her,
And tell her how much I missed being with her,
Talking to her,
And sharing my dreams with her,
Singing a song for her!
I should go back to myself!
And have a glass of tea with myself,
Back behind that window,
And listening to the song of that tiny bird which has a great sound
While staring at those beautiful white roses in my tiny garden!

I should go back to myself!

<em>Adventurous!</em>

July 29, 2015

i hate wars, may peace surround all over the world . ocean u seemed to be badly addicted , u had side effects of a real addiction :D i am not as bad as u were :D :P

August 1, 2015

Just some photos about wars and atrocities all over the world which I saw on the internet made me think it is good that nothing lasts forever and that the world will end one day :) Elina the addict :D The last time I drank tea I felt a sharp pain in my stomach. That terrible sensation made me stop drinking tea. But it was not easy for me at all; I had terrible headaches and felt very sleep all the time. Anyway, I get along well without drinking tea now. :)

July 31, 2015

I am glad to hear that you are not depressed . why were you thinking about end of the world? i am addicted to tea, my addiction is bad, i can't quit this addiction ://

July 31, 2015

This morning I was sitting in the yard thinking about when the world will end! Please, don't think I'm depressed or disappointed. No, I'm not :) The last lines of your poem reminded me of what I was thinking about. BTW I quit drinking tea last year :P

July 31, 2015

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