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take my little boy to get his first passport I got a day off today and planed to take my 1Y boy to apply his first passport due to our Okinawa trip in Sep., and I also had to renew my passport which expires in less 6 months. It was so hot in the morning and the baby car was left on my father-in-law' car so that I couldn't use it today. I had to hold him whose weight is 12kg. Sometimes I let him walk alone and hold his hands, but he didn't always let me hold his hands. He ran and screamed on the pavement. People walked by all watched him. To control him outside just by myself is really tiring.
Jul 30, 2015 2:27 PM
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take my little boy to get his first passport

Taking my little boy to get his first passport.

 

I got a day off today and planed to take my 1Y boy to apply his first passport due to our Okinawa trip in Sep.,<em>(this sentence is too long and needs to split into two sentences)</em>

I took the day off work today to take my one year old son to his first passport application. We need the passport for our Okinawa trip and I also had to renew my passport which expires in less 6 months.


It was so hot in the morning and the baby car was left on my father-in-law' car so that I couldn't use it today.

It was so hot in the morning and the baby car was left in my father-in-law's car so that I couldn't use it today.


I had to hold him whose weight is 12kg.

I had to carry him and he weighs twelve kilograms.

 

Sometimes I let him walk alone and hold his hands, but he didn't always let me hold his hands.

Sometimes I let him walk alone holding his hands, but he didn't always let me hold them. <em>(you cannot walk alone and also be holding someone's hand)</em>

 

He ran and screamed on the pavement.

 

People walked by all watched him.

Those people walking by all looked at him.

 

To control him outside just by myself is really tiring.

July 30, 2015
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