Vladimir
This is my first post in English language :) Hi guys! My name is Vladimir, I'am from Moscow. I want to study English language. Can you help me? ;)
Jul 30, 2015 7:36 PM
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This is my first post in English language :)

[[If you want to include the word "language", it is best to have the word "the" in front of the word "English". so it would be "This is my first post in the English language." However, this sounds a bit unnatural so it's best to completely drop the word "language" altogether and let "English" stand alone as a noun. So, "This is my first post in English."]]

 

Hi guys! My name is Vladimir, I'am from Moscow. I want to study English language. Can you help me? ;)

[[I highlighted the comma in "...Vladimir, I'am..." because it shouldn't be there. For this, you have two options. you could end it with a period ("My name is Vladimir. I am from Moscow.") or, if you really want the phrase to be together, you could use a semi colon. A semi colon completes a sentence while still attaching it to another. ("My name is Vladimir; I am from Moscow")

 

Another grammar error you have is "I'am". "I" and "am" are two different words. These can be combined with the apostrophe you've put in, but, in this case, the "a" in "am" but be dropped. So it would correctly be "I'm".

 

Sorry my message is so long. I would like to share a smuch as possible.]]

July 30, 2015
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