A luck cold last week,I planed to climb hills at the weekend,I felt very exciting ,blue sky,clear water,trees and so on.so I got up early last saturday,but I felt very bad,I had a cold ,I had a stom

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A luck cold last week,I planed to climb hills at the weekend,I felt very exciting ,blue sky,clear water,trees and so on.so I got up early last saturday,but I felt very bad,I had a cold ,I had a stomachache,just then my phone rang ,it is my friend Fucos ,he is in shenzhen ,he said to me ,he was climbing wutong hills.I told him,I just had a cold ,so I had to give up my plan.he loudly siad to me,you should go to see a doctor. I went to hospital when I had have breakfast ,the nurse told me ,the doctor was very busy today,so i need waited for a moment.but half hour pass away,the doctor didn't see me ,I got angry,I stood up.went to the doctor office,I loudly said to the doctor.you must saw me now.she said to me ,just waiting a mius,i would see you when I finished this patient,suddenly,someone called my name ,Are you gary.aha ,gary,I am Mike,can you remember me, wov,he is my classmate mike,I had never saw him for 10 years ,he is a fat ,I felt very happy,I said to the doctor,sorry,I didn't see ,I recovered now

Jul 31, 2015 2:56 AM

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A luck cold

Last week, I planned to climb hills on the weekend. I felt very excited. Blue sky, clear water, trees and so on. So, I got up early last Saturday, but I felt very bad. I had a cold and a stomachache. Just then my phone rang. It was my friend Fucos. He was in Shenzhenm he said to me, and he was climbing Wutong Hills. I told him, ¨I just got a cold, so I had to cancel my plans.¨ He loudly said to me, ¨You should go to see a doctor.¨
I went to clinic after I had had breakfast. The nurse told me that the doctor was very busy today, so I needed to wait for a moment. But half an hour passed away, and the doctor still hadn't seen me. I got angry and I stood up. I went to the doctor's office, and I loudly said loudly to the doctor, you must saw see me now. She said to me, just waiting a minute, I will see you when I am finished with this patient. Suddenly, someone called my name. ¨Are you Gary? Hey, Gary, I am Mike, do you remember me?¨ Wow, it's my classmate Mike, I had not seen him for 10 years. He was fat. I felt very happy, and I said to the doctor, ¨Sorry, I didn't see, I am better now.¨

July 31, 2015

A lucky cold

Last week, I planned to climb hills on the weekend. I felt very excited about the blue sky, clear water, trees and so on, so I got up early last Saturday,but I felt very bad. I had a cold and a stomachache. Just then my phone rang. It was my friend Fucos, who was in Shenzhen. Me said to me that he was climbing the Wutong hills. I told him I just had a cold ,so I had to give up my plan. He loudly said to me that I should go to see a doctor.
I went to hospital when I had finished breakfast. The nurse told me that the doctor was very busy today, so I needed to wait for a moment. But a half hour passed away, and the doctor didn't see me. I got angry, so I stood up, went to the doctor's office, and I loudly said to the doctor, "You must see me now." She said to me, "Just wait a minute, I will see you when I finished this patient." Suddenly, someone called my name. "Are you Gary? Aha, Gary, I am Mike. Can you remember me? Wow, he was my classmate Mike. I had not seen him for 10 years. He was a fat. I felt very happy, so I said to the doctor,sorry, I didn't see, I have recovered now.