Please check up! This is a round robin story. Yesterday I did to making story as play in my class. Please check up! I like listen to music. So, I go to concert everyday. I pictured singer and sh

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Please check up! This is a round robin story. Yesterday I did to making story as play in my class. Please check up! I like listen to music. So, I go to concert everyday. I pictured singer and showed my friends. One day, I met friend in concert. We went to outside When we arrived at the lobby. We can’t believe that. There is my favorite singer “Park Hyo sin”. He looks like the god… I felt my heart-beat very fast. Mr. Park looked us and walked toward us. (Maybe He just attended the concert by audience) He said “Let’s go out with me?” I screamed! “YES! I want to out with you!” Mr. Park seemed a little scared of me, but he agreed to eat shaved ice with me. I asked him what his favorite flavor is… he said mint choco chip. O screamed again “OMG! Me too! Mint is my favorite shared ice flavor!!! OMG OMG~!” It all seemed like a dream. However, suddenly, it became a nightmare. Park Bo-young appeared and said to Mr. Park “don’t date her. She has a weird nose!” So, Mr. Park Hyo Sin ran away with Park Bo-young. I cried so much while eating a big bowl of jajjangmyun(black bean noodles).

Jul 31, 2015 6:13 AM

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This is a round robin story.
Yesterday, I made a story for a play for my class.
Please check up!

I like listening to music.
So, I go to concerts everyday. I took pictures of the singer and showed my friends. One day, I met a friend at a concert. We went to outside.
When we arrived at the lobby, we couldn't believe what we saw. My favorite singer, Park Hyo sin, was there.
He looks like a god… I felt my heart beat very fast. Mr. Park looked at us and walked toward us.
(Maybe he was just attending the concert. by audience)
He said, “Want to go out with me?”
I screamed! “YES! I want to out with you!”
Mr. Park seemed a little scared of me, but he agreed to eat shaved ice with me. I asked him what his favorite flavor is… he said mint choco chip. I screamed again, “OMG! Me too! Mint is my favorite shared ice flavor!!! OMG OMG~!” It all seemed like a dream.
However, suddenly, it became a nightmare. Park Bo-young appeared and said to Mr. Park, “Don’t date her. She has a weird nose!” So, Mr. Park Hyo Sin ran away with Park Bo-young. I cried so much while eating a big bowl of jajjangmyun (black bean noodles).