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some toilet rules! Dear guests you are kindly asked not to throw in the toilet toilet paper, sanitary napkins and other products that can clog the drain. The sewer pipes of the entire village are often invaded by the roots of the lush vegetation (often oleander). We invite you to respect this simple rule in order not to have unpleasant incidents that could make your vacation less enjoyable as well as lead to an increase of expenses, due to intervention of expensive specific machinery.
Jul 31, 2015 7:37 AM
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Some Toilet Rules!

Dear guests, We kindly ask that you not dispose of toilet paper, sanitary napkins, or other products that can clog the drain in the toilet. (The roots of the village's lush vegetation unfortunately interfere with the local plumbing system.)

Please respect this simple rule to avoid unpleasant incidents that could make your vacation less enjoyable. Failure to follow this rule may hold you liable to expenses incurred for repairs. Thank you for your understanding.

 

(Question: Where are guests supposed to dispose of their toilet paper if not in the toilet?..)

July 31, 2015

Some toilet rules!

Dear guests. You are kindly asked not to throw toilet paper, sanitary napkins or other products that can clog the drain into the toilet . 'Into the toilet' sounds more natural at the end of the sentence.

The sewer pipes of the entire village are often invaded by the roots of the lush vegetation (usually oleander).   I changed the second 'often' to 'usually' because it sounds more natural not to use the same word in one sentence too much.

We invite you to respect this simple rule in order to not to have any unpleasant incidents that could make your vacation less enjoyable as well as lead to an increase of expenses, due to the intervention of expensive specific machinery.

Good job!

 

July 31, 2015
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