I need help with this. Many thanks Introduction The aim of this report is to outline the main places where tourist can buy whatever they want in an economical way, without being worried about money.

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I need help with this. Many thanks Introduction The aim of this report is to outline the main places where tourist can buy whatever they want in an economical way, without being worried about money. The shopping centre My town, Palma, is quite big, so it has an important mall near the tourist zone where visitors can enjoy a large variety of shops.Also, if they get tired after an exhausting day looking for the perfect gift for their family, they can get relaxed just going for a drink in one of the incredible bars that they can find there. Looking for a calmly place Sometimes the shopping center could be so stressful and people who come from small cities could find this too much for them, but Palma has the perfect solution: there are small shops, more familiar than the shopping center, near to the most of hotels,that are suitable for these visitors. Recommendations I recommend coming to Palma for shopping, because you can also enjoy the beach after a shopping day and do a sightseeing tour in the famous tourist bus. This would encourage people to stay in Palma on their holidays.

Jul 31, 2015 2:51 PM

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I need help with this. Many thanks

Introduction
The aim of this report is to outline the main places where tourists can buy whatever they want in an economical way, without being worried about money.

The shopping center
My town, Palma, is quite big, so it has an important mall near the tourist zone where visitors can enjoy a large variety of shops. Also, if they get tired after an exhausting day looking for the perfect gift for their family, they can get relaxed simply by getting a drink in one of the incredible bars that they can find there.

Looking for a calmly place
Sometimes the shopping center can be so stressful and people who come from small cities could find this too much for them, but Palma has the perfect solution: there are small shops, more familiar than the shopping center, near to the most of the hotels, that are suitable for these visitors.

Recommendations
I recommend coming to Palma for shopping, because you can also enjoy the beach after a long day of shopping day and do a sightseeing tour in the famous tourist bus. This would encourage people to stay in Palma during their vacations.

July 31, 2015

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July 31, 2015

I need help with this. Many thanks

Introduction
The aim of this report is to outline the main places where tourists can buy whatever they want in an economical way, without being worried about money.

The shopping centre
My town, Palma, is quite big, so it has an important mall near the tourist zone where visitors can enjoy a large variety of shops. Also, if they get tired after an exhausting day looking for the perfect gift for their family, they can relax just going for a drink in one of the incredible bars that they can find there.

Looking for a calm place
Sometimes the shopping center can be so stressful and people who come from small cities can find this too much for them, but Palma has the perfect solution: there are small shops, more familiar than the shopping center, near to the most of hotels, that are suitable for these visitors.

Recommendations
I recommend coming to Palma for shopping, because you can also enjoy the beach after a day of shopping day and do a sightseeing tour in the famous tourist bus. This would encourages people to stay in Palma on their holidays.

<em>[Good work. You should use present tense (can instead of could), since you are talking about a present-day situation. You would use past tense for a situation that occurred in the past and possibly has changed or no longer exists.]</em>

July 31, 2015

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