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Youtube Today I want to about one Spanish youtuber called Grace. She has got a channel called "Happysunnyflowers" and there she upload videos about makeup, tips, outfist, hairstyles, her family live, halls, recipes... She lives in Madrid but she was born in Colombia. She lived there until she's 4 years and after she came to Spain. When she finished the high school she went away to Los Ángeles. There she met a man (Jacob) and now a days he is her husband. They have two daughters. Violetta Belle is the oldest and she's 2 years old and Allegra Rose was born on April. Violetta was born in California and last year they returned to Spain so her sister was born here. I recomend you her videos because are very funny and she is a lovely woman! What is your favourite youtuber?
Jul 31, 2015 3:04 PM
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Today I want to talk about one Spanish youtuber called Grace. She has got a channel called "Happysunnyflowers" and there she uploads videos about makeup, tips, outfist outfits, hairstyles, her family live life, halls, and recipes... (When you have a list, you should place the word "and" before the last item in the list.)
She lives in Madrid but she was born in Colombia Columbia. She lived there ("There" is vague here because you just introduced two new locations at the same time.) until she's was ("She's" is only a contraction of "she is.") 4 years and after that (You could also say "afterward(s)." "After" generally needs a noun after it.) she came to Spain. When she finished the high school (When we say something like this, we're talking about the institution of high school in general, not about a specific high school. Since it's a general thing we're talking about, we don't use an article.) she went away to Los Ángeles. There she met a man (Jacob) and now a days now ("Nowadays" suggests some habitual action or activity that isn't the way is was in the past. In this case, it's better to just say "now.") he is her husband. They have two daughters. Violetta Belle is the oldest and she's 2 years old and Allegra Rose was born on in April.
Violetta was born in California and last year they returned to Spain so her sister was born here.
I recommend you watch her videos because they (Very rarely can you leave out the subject of a verb in English.) are very funny and she is a lovely woman!
What Who ("What" suggests that people who make Youtube videos are things.) is your favourite youtuber?

July 31, 2015
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