I would be very grateful if you could help me

Dear Kim,
It's good to hear about from you! It's been a long time since the last time you write to me we wrote to eachother.

I've given the porter the keys, so you can ask him for it, telling him your name and identity number in orden to ensure that you are the real Kim, because last week a thief broke into the flat and stole some of my personal belongings.

Also, you can find a supermarket near my house whose prices are very reasonable, but if you prefer to buy fresh (fruit and veg )etables there's a street market where local products are sold.

I have to remind you to check from time to time that everything is correct there, because some months ago we had a problem with the taps, which were broken and the flat started to leak water. If you notice something wrong, please let me know!

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

I would be very grateful if you could help me

Dear Kim,
It's good to hear about you! It's been a long time since the last time you write to me.

I've given the flat's guard the keys, so you can ask him for it telling him your name and identity number in ordenr to ensure that you are the real Kim, because last week a thief broke into the flat and stole some of my personal belongings.

Also, you can find a supermarket near my house whose prices are very reasonable, but if you prefer to buy fresher fruit and vegetables there's a street market where local products are sold.

I have to remind you to check from time to time that everything is correct there, because some months ago we had a problem with the taps, which were broken and the flat started to lose water. If you notice something wrong, please let me know!

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Dear Kim,

It's good to hear from you. It has been a long time since you last wrote me.

I have given the keys to the flat to the security guard on duty there, so you will need to ask him for them. Just tell him your name and id number so that he can identify you, because last week a thief broke into the flat and stole some of my personal belongings. 

Near the flat there is a supermarket whose prices are very reasonable. If you prefer fresh fruit and vegetables, there is also a nearby street market where locally grown fresh fruit and vegetables are sold.

As a precaution, you may want to check from time to time to be sure that everything is working properly at the flat, because a few months ago we had a problem with the taps being broken and the water was leaking. If you notice something wrong, please let me know.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,