STATEMENT: It's parent's fault, that children are overweight.
Hi guys,
STATEMENT: It's parent's fault, that children are overweight.
This is my opinion on the statement above:
I agree with this statement because parents can play an important role on in avoiding their children getting avoiding overweight obesity by not eating out in fast foods places like McDonald's or by not allowing them eat some certain unhealthy and/or fatty foods. But unfortunately, many parents are unfortunately not aware of dangers of different diseases caused by overweight obesity.
Some people believe that it is the fault of fast food companies that makes for making the children overweight, because they encourage the children or their parents consuming to consume their food using distracting marketing strategies and advertisements. But I am not agree in agreement with them, because those companies contribute to the economy of our country. and yet, People can should think about and consider the consequences of eating in those restaurants, but it this doesn't apply to the children, of course.
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Thanks,
Aziz.
STATEMENT: It's the parent's fault that children are overweight.
This is my opinion on the statement above:
I agree with this statement because parents can play an important role in helping their children to avoid obesity by not eating out in fast foods places like McDonald's or by not allowing them eat certain unhealthy and/or fatty foods. But unfortunately, many parents are not aware of the dangers of different diseases caused by obesity.
Some people believe that it is the fault of fast food companies for making children overweight, because they encourage children or their parents to consume their food using distracting marketing strategies and advertisements. But [or however] I am not in agreement with them, because those companies contribute to the economy of our country. People should think about and consider the consequences of eating in those restaurants, but this doesn't apply to children, of course.
