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Hello!
How are things? What's the weather like? I hope you and your family  are in good health and in high spirits.
As for me, I am fine and enjoying my trip in to the UK. I have been staying here for two weeks already.
Yesterday I was in at the Tower of London. It's an amazing place and gorgeous to look at. So amazing, so gorgeous the place is.  I especially liked our guide. He was so clever and witty<em>('witty' is an adjective which means 'a person who speaks with humour')</em> spoke with humour and made making us laugh a lot. It is so great that many of the families who work at the Tower live there <em>(or live onsite)</em> too.   live inside Tower who work for Tower. I think it is a clever idea/ makes sense so wise - and is a great perk of the job.
I think I mentioned  in on my previous letter to you that I managed to visit such places of interest as like the Kensington Gardens, the Science Museum and so on. I love it so much there. I absolutely loved it there.
Tomorrow I am going to Cambridge to visit the Orthodox Church in honour of Saint Isaak Syrin and of course, as Cambridge is reputed to be one of the most beautiful cities in the world, I'll be taking to have a sightseeing tour too around it.
On Monday I am going to Brompton Cemetery to visit the grave of Anthony of Sourozh.
As for my daughter, I skype with her every day. She is having lots of fun in Crimea and has even started going on horse riding lessons.
That's all my news.
Waiting for good news from you.  to hear from you.
Lots of fun love

Could you help with my notebook, please. Many thanks for your help

Hello!

How are things? What's the weather like? I hope you and your family in good health and in high spirits.
As for me, I am fine, enjoying my trip in the UK. I have been staying here for two weeks already.
Yesterday I was in [although correct grammatically, it means that you were imprisoned in there, this is because when used with words like "tower", "prison", "jail"] at the Tower. The place is so amazing, so thrilling gorgeous the place is I won't say the place is beautiful, especially given its history. I especially, I liked our guide. He was so clever witty and spoke with humour making made us laugh a lot. It is so great that many families live and work inside the Tower who work for Tower. I think it is so wise - and a great perk.

I think I mentioned in my previous letter to you that I managed to visit such places of interest as the Kensington Gardens, the Science Museum and so on. I love it so much there.

Tomorrow I am going to Cambridge to visit the Orthodox Church in honour of Saint Isaak Syrin and of course as Cambridge is reputed to be one of the most beautiful cities in the world and there is to have a sightseeing tour around for it.

On Monday, I am going to the Brompton Cemetery to and visit the grave of Anthony of Sourozh.
As for my daughter, I Skype with her every day. She is having lots of fun in Crimea and even started going on horse-riding lessons.

That's all my news for now.

Waiting for good news from you.  Unless there is something that you must know, this is superfluous since you are on a tour.  She's not going to bother your fun until at least you return home/

Lots of fun Shouldn't write this.  Depending on her mood that day, this may have the opposite effect of saying that she is stuck with nowhere else to go to have fun like you.  So don't rub it in.

Could you help with my notebook, please. Many thanks for your help

Hello!
How are things? What's the weather like? I hope you and your family are in good health and in high spirits.
As for me, I am fine enjoying my trip in to the UK. I have been staying here for two weeks already.
Yesterday I was in the Tower. This place is so amazing, so gorgeous the place is. Especially, I especially liked our tour guide. He was so clever and spoke with humour, which made us laugh a lot. It is so great that many families who live inside Tower who work for Tower. I think it is so wise; a great perk.
I think I mentioned on in my previous letter to you that I managed to visit such places of interest such as the Kensington Gardens, the Science Museum and so on. I love it so much here.
Tomorrow, I am going to Cambridge to visit the Orthodox Church in honour of Saint Isaak Syrin, and, of course, as Cambridge is reputed to be one of the most beautiful cities in the world in which to go have a sightseeing tour around it. 

On Monday, I am going to the Brompton Cemetery to visit the grave of Anthony of Sourozh.
As for my daughter, I skype with her every day. She is having lots of fun in Crimea, and even started going on taking horse riding lessons.
That's all my news.
Waiting for good news from you.
Lots of fun