Mateus
My first english words I hope you all loved it I'm tired to fighting with the people like if they don't understand me, there's a voice inside me screaming out to run away everything in my way.It looks like something is being put in my chest drilling my heart letting in pieces everything that people says about me or who I am.
Aug 1, 2015 7:56 AM
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My first English words. I hope you will all love it.

I'm tired of fighting with the people like if they don't understand me, there's a voice inside me screaming out to run away from everything in my way. It seems as if something is being put in my chest, drilling into my heart, and letting in pieces of everything that people say about me or who I am.

<em>I rewrote some thing to make it sound better.</em>

Very poetic! Always try to ignore people who say negative things about you. Life is too short to let things hold you back.

August 1, 2015
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