I hate the newly-constructed building opposite to my house.

I used to start my day peacefully by standing from on the balcony to enjoy bird songs the birdsong mixed into with yellow-tinted dyed fresh air and feast my eyes with upon the bonsais and flowers from a neighboring terrace garden. The day was then ended by with a cup of rosehip tea at on the balcony after a hardworking day. It is was so elegant to have having my hair caressed by the wind while gazing at the moon.

Sadly, everything has come to an end when now that people have started constructing a new building in front of my house. The air is now polluted by dust and continuous annoying sound noises. My beloved balcony is even covered by with a thick layer of cement dust. The most painful thing is that the new building is higher then than its neighbors thus it hides the sky behind itself and prevents my house from sunlight and moonlight. the sunlight and moonlight from reaching my house.

I really want hope that the building is will be completed soon to give me back the fresh air. From For now, it will be difficult to have lovely nights under the moonlight with my hair catching the wind.

Short happy days!<em> This final closing expression I don't really understand. Sorry!</em>

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I Hate the Newly-constructed Building Opposite (to) My House

Not so long ago, it was such a pleasure for me to welcome in each new day. Just slipping out on to my balcony, I was rewarded with nature's free early morning show. (I used to start my day peacefully by standing from the balcony) From that idyll, I could savour the sound of (to enjoy) bird song mingled with (songs mixed into) yellow-tinted (dyed) fresh air and feast my eyes on bonsai (with bonsais) and flowers from a neighbouring (neighbor) terrace garden. Fast forward, and at the close of a hardworking day, I would retire to my little eden to enjoy (The day was then ended by) a cup of rosehip tea as day turned to night. (at the balcony.) (after a hardworking day.) It is such a (so) romantic feel for a girl (elegant) to have her (my) hair caressed by the warm evening breeze whilst (wind while) gazing starry-eyed at the moon.

Sad to say, all that has ended with the construction of (Sadly,everything has come to an end when people have started constructing) a new building in front of my house. The air is now polluted by dust and a cacophony of sound. (continuous annoying sound.) My beloved balcony is even covered by a thick layer of cement dust. Most painful of all, however, (The most painful thing) is that the new building towers over its neighbours, (is higher then it neighbors thus it hides the sky behind itself and) so preventing (my house from) sun (sunlight) and moonlight from reaching my house. 

I long for (really want) the building work to be (is) completed soon, so I can breathe (to give me back the) fresh air once again. Until then, (From now, it will be difficult to have) lovely nights spent under the moonlight with the wind catching my hair (catching the wind.) would seem but a distant memory! 

Short happy days!

Very well written and constructed, with good grammar and descriptive adjectives. I don't think you will appreciate me suggesting so many changes as your original was already an impressive piece of writing. I just wanted to enhance what you had already written.