Mario
The problem of deforestation The logging activity is very dangerous for the environment and for the humankind. It may be solved by a strict policy of governments. We should impose to people to differentiate waste materials. We should improve a good recycle activity. Furthermore, we should make more green-areas in a city, places where babies, guys and adults can enjoy their spare time. The air and water are filled with pollutants, in spite of customary in good society to make more things in order to increase the GDP, people should minimize buying things and they should fight against consumerism whose basic idea is the motion of deforestation and other environmental pollution. In the city I live in, we have a problem of over-builded-houses outlaw. Cutting down trees have caused many damages to the environment in fact the soil is less solid, the roots, which stabilize the soil and prevent erosion, are vanishing and "rootless" places are more dangerous for runoff activity. More responsible logging activity are needed for a better life for us and for our world, always spoiled by humankind.
Aug 1, 2015 2:19 PM
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The problem of deforestation.

The Logging activity is very dangerous for the environment and for the humankind. It may be solved by a strict policy of governments governmental policy. We should impose to make people to differentiate separate waste materials. We should improve a good recycle recycling activity.
Furthermore, we should make more green-areas green areas in a city cities, places where babies, guys young people and adults can enjoy their spare time.
The air and water are filled with pollutants, in spite of customary the trend to in good society to make more things in order to increase the GDP, people should minimize buying things and they should fight against consumerism whose basic idea is the motion which is rooted in the idea of deforestation and other environmental pollution.
In the city I live in, we have a problem of over-builded-houses outlaw the over-construction of houses. Cutting down trees have has caused many much damages to the environment. In fact the soil is less solid, the roots, which stabilize the soil and prevent erosion, are vanishing and "rootless" places are more dangerous for runoff activity.
More responsible logging activity are is needed for a better life for us and for our world, always spoiled which has always been damaged by humankind.

 

* It's very good overall. The only bit I couldn't understand was 'a problem of over-builded-houses outlaw'. Do you mean the building of too many illegal houses?

* 'In the city I live in' is correct, but in very formal writing I would write 'in the city in which I live'. This is a written style, though.

 

August 1, 2015
In England we have to separate everything already into separate bins (US=trash cans). We have a bin for recycling, a bin for organic waste and so on. Isn't it like that in Italy?
August 2, 2015
Which city was it?
August 2, 2015
Great opinion. I lived in a city which had a higher pollution but now the government more care and builds lot of green area and thats work actually even not one hundred percent
August 1, 2015
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