Misa
8/5/2015 The old man stood at the roadside, he took a pack of cigarette out of his pocket, tapping at the back of the pack and pulling out a cigarette. He stuck it to his mouth and lit it. He inhaled the cigarette deeply. He grasped the thin stick between his thumb and forefinger, closing his eye as if he was reminiscing of the old times. He took another slow and long draw, blowing the smoke out of his mouth. He took a gulp again this time, exhaling the smoke and tipped the ashes off. After a while, he dropped the butt on the floor, grounding the butt using his shoe.
Aug 2, 2015 5:49 AM
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August 2, 2015
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