Alexy
On My home way I was On the train for 14+hours ,Because it's far way around 2000km,out the train window ,it's nice view ,different place es different weather ,I like the rain beatOn the window .like an angel cry for unlucky people .But happy all the way .
Aug 2, 2015 10:15 AM
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On my way home.

I was on the train over 14 hours (<em>or something like that</em>=I was going by train over 14 hours) , because my way (home) was so far - it was around 2000 km long (<em>or like that</em>=it was about 2000 km long). Nice views rushed past behind the train window. And different places had different weather. I liked the rain beating on the window, it was just like an angel crying for unlucky people. But I was so much happy (during) all the way.

 

P.S.

1.Please pay attention to the fact, that I'm not a native language person (I'm Russian - my native language is Russian) and therefore I can make any mistakes too. :))

2. There is a grammar rule in English - so-called "sequence-of-tense", according to whom, if in the main sentence is used Past Indefinite Tense, so in appendix sentense also should be used one of Past forms of Tenses (i.d. if originally were Present Indefinite Tense - will be Past Indefinite etc.).

3. "rush past" verb I also took from dictionary :))  It means "go fast past; pass fast by" - you should better look yourself.

4. That my translation is just my opinion - I would be say like that. By the way I like you style "like an angel cry..." - so beautiful and romantic!

Good luck!

January 2, 2016
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