Negin
I want to introduce myself Hello,my name is Negin. I live in Iran, in the Esfahan city. Esfahan is so beautiful.It has many places that I suggest you to visit them. Now I will introduce some of this places: 1.Imam squar: here is very beautiful. it contains a historical mosque. You can ride sleigh there. 2.SI VA SE Briedg;Unfortunately nowdays it doesent have any water,but it is still beautiful. Esfahan has many other beautiful places. I can't mention all of them now.
Aug 2, 2015 10:55 AM
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I want would like to introduce myself:

Hello, my name is Negin.
I live in Iran, in the Esfahan city Esfahan / in the city of Esfahan. Esfahan is so very beautiful. It has many places that I suggest you to visit them are worth visiting.
Now I will introduce These are some of this places:
1. Imam squar Square: here this square is very beautiful. i It contains a historical mosque. You can ride sleigh ? there.
2.SI VA SE Briedg Si-o-Se Bridge; Unfortunately nowdays at the moment it doesent doesn't have any water, but it is still beautiful.

Esfahan has many other beautiful places. It would be impossible to list can't mention all of them now.

 

Hello Negin,

 

- Did you know that Esfahan can also be called 'Isfahan' in English?

- Take care to add a space after punctuation like a full stop (US = period) and after a comma.

- 'Imam Square' would also have two capital letters, e.g. Times Square, Trafalgar Square, Tiananmen Square.

August 4, 2015
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