María Ángeles
The rain Although we suffered a big storm yesterday evening, anything was damaged and today the soil smells to oregano and lavender. The fragance of these aromatic plants remind me the scents of some meals of my chilhood in my parent´s house. Maybe that is the reason of my recent melancholy, but I don´t mind because everything shines in blue and green, what is an amazing scenery for my eyes.
Aug 2, 2015 6:14 PM
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The Rain

Although we suffered a big storm yesterday evening, nothing  anything was damaged and today the soil smells to like oregano and lavender. The fragance of these aromatic plants reminds me of the  scents aromas/smells of some meals of my childhood in my parent´s house. Maybe that is the reason of for my recent melancholy, but I don´t mind because everything shines in blue and green, what is an amazing sight scenery for me my eyes.

August 2, 2015

The rain

Although we suffered a big storm yesterday evening, nothing was damaged and today the soil smells of oregano and lavender. The fragance of these aromatic plants reminds me of food and my childhood house (This sentence could be contracted as it avoids repeating various 'smell/aroma/scent' words and also your childhood house would normally automatically be your parents.. for flow). 

Maybe this is the cause of my recent melancholy / Maybe this is why I have been so melancholic recently

 but I don´t mind because everything shines in blue and green: what amazing scenery for my eyes to behold.

 

Hola. Tengo algos tiempos. estos son sólo sugerencias. Pero pienso que te gusta.

Again, a delicate use of language. :)

August 15, 2015
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