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我學習普通話 我姐姐是來自台灣,我會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在做什麼。我知道幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想提高和驚喜我的大姐姐。 感謝您的閱讀 What I was hoping to write: (Any corrections appreciated) My older sister is from Taiwan and I am going to visit her in February. I promised her I would practice my Mandarin, so that is what I will do. I don't know much Mandarin, besides a few words she taught me. I need to practice my speaking mostly. I want to improve and surprise my older sister. Thank you for reading
Aug 3, 2015 3:09 AM
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我學習普通話

我姐姐是來自台灣,我會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在做什麼。我知道幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想提高和驚喜我的大姐姐。
感謝您的閱讀

 


What I was hoping to write:
(Any corrections appreciated)
My older sister is from Taiwan 姐姐是在台湾長大 This is the nuance in English and I am going to visit her in February. 而二月去看她, 拜訪 is too distant a term to use between immediate family.  I promised her I would practice my Mandarin, so that is what I will do. 我答應她我會把我的國語This is the Taiwanese term for Mandarin.  普通話 is used by the Mainland, just like UK, US or Canadian English may use different terms to express the same thing 努力地學得好 I don't know much Mandarin, besides a few words she taught me. 除了一些姐姐教的幾句, 甚麼都不會. I need to practice my speaking mostly. 大部份的練習是在口語的方面中I want to improve and surprise my older sister. 我要進步, 要令姐姐驚喜
Thank you for reading

August 3, 2015

我學習普通話

我姐姐是來自台灣,我會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在做什麼。我知道幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想提高和驚喜我的大姐姐。
感謝您的閱讀


August 3, 2015

我學習普通話

我姐姐來自台灣,我在二月會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在這的原因做什麼。我知道我只會說幾句她教給我的普通話幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想要給提高和驚喜我的大姐姐一個驚喜
感謝您的閱讀

 

Sometimes some people's Mandarin is hard to correct because it is so hard to tell what they are attempting to convey. But the meaning of your Mandarin is clear enough (w/o looking at the translation), it is pretty good. 加油!



What I was hoping to write:
(Any corrections appreciated)
My older sister is from Taiwan and I am going to visit her in February. I promised her I would practice my Mandarin, so that is what I will do. I don't know much Mandarin, besides a few words she taught me. I need to practice my speaking mostly. I want to improve and surprise my older sister.
Thank you for reading

August 3, 2015

我學習普通話

我姐姐是來自台灣,我會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在做什麼。我知道幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想提高和驚喜我的大姐姐。
感謝您的閱讀


我姊姊來自台灣,而我打算二月時去拜訪/看她。我曾答應她會好好學習中文,但除了她教我的幾句話之外,我實在懂得不多。現在主要我要加強口語練習,希望到時候我的中文表達能給她一個驚喜。

 


What I was hoping to write:
(Any corrections appreciated)
My older sister is from Taiwan and I am going to visit her in February. I promised her I would practice my Mandarin, so that is what I will do. I don't know much Mandarin, besides a few words she taught me. I need to practice my speaking mostly. I want to improve and surprise my older sister.
Thank you for reading

August 3, 2015

我學習普通話

我姐姐是來自台灣,我會去拜訪她在二月。我答應她我會實踐我普通話。所以這是我在做什麼。我知道幾乎沒有普通話除了幾句話,她教給我的。我想練習我的口語。我想提高和驚喜我的大姐姐。
感謝您的閱讀

 

我的姐姐來自臺灣,我想二月去看她。我曾向她保證我會練習我的漢語,這也就是我要做的。除了她叫我的幾句,我幾乎不會說漢語。我需要儘可能練習我的普通話,我想快點進步,給她一個驚喜。

 

What I was hoping to write:
(Any corrections appreciated)
My older sister is from Taiwan and I am going to visit her in February. I promised her I would practice my Mandarin, so that is what I will do. I don't know much Mandarin, besides a few words she taught me. I need to practice my speaking mostly. I want to improve and surprise my older sister.
Thank you for reading

August 3, 2015
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