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She changes me ,changes my life. We called her Mrs He. She looks young and beautiful.When I first met her,she didn't talk much.She just told us to study carefully.Don't pay attention to useless things.At first,I didn't like her at all.I just thought she is a bored teacher like many other teachers.But when she gave us math lessons,i was shocked Because she could explain everything clearly.She is a great teacher actually.She not only teaches us math,but also life. I remember that she always hold class activities.She said we must study well,and play well.Later ,she began to read newspaper for us.After that ,she asked How do you think about it? Then many students would tell us what they thought.At last,she said we students should have our own ideas, After every speech class,she always tell us a new saying. Now i have finished my education in junior high.But i will not forget what she taught me.
Aug 3, 2015 6:51 AM
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I am grateful to see my student praise me.I hope you a better future.I am always proud of you. Yours Ms. He
August 3, 2015

She changes me ,changes my life.

We called her Mrs He. She looks young and beautiful. When I first met her, she didn't talk much. She just told us to study carefully. Don't pay attention to useless things. At first, I didn't like her at all. I just thought she is a boringed teacher like many others* teachers.But when she gave us math lessons, I was surprised/shocked because she could explain everything clearly. She is a great teacher actually. She not only teaches us math, but also about life.
I remember that she always held class activities. She said we must study well, and play well. Later, she began to read the newspaper for us. After that, she asked How "What do you think about it?" * Then many students would tell us what they thought. At last, she said that we students should have our own ideas.
After every speech class, she always tell taught/told us a new saying.
Now I have finished my education in junior high, *but I will not forget what she taught me.

*avoid repeat of word 'teacher'

*use quote marks " . . "

*don't start sentence with 'But'

August 3, 2015
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