massimiliano
2° English test- My cat From Several week, i have a cat. he don’t really mine, it’s arrived in my house and has did my garden him , but he don’t want to be touched and when I'm going from he, he fast escapes!! I and my girlfriend can give food at he, but we don’t can cuddle! We think he have to need of time for trust about we.
Aug 3, 2015 8:17 AM
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2° English test- My cat

For several weeks, I have had a cat. 

 

He isn’t really mine, he arrived in my house and has made my garden his own, but he doesn’t want to be touched and when I'm going towards him, he quickly escapes!!
My girlfriend and I can give him food at he, but we don’t can't cuddle him! We think he have to needs of time to trust us.

 

Well done, Massimiliano!


Some advice:


He IS mine - He ISN'T mine.

We CAN touch the cat - We CAN'T touch the cat.



Great job!  Sorry I didn't see this until today!  I hope you're well!

Leigh

August 3, 2015

2° English test- My cat

From For several weeks, I have had a cat. He's not don’t really mine, it’s arrived in at my house and has been in did my garden him , but he doesn’t want to be touched, and when I'm going towards him from he, he runs away/[fast escapes]!!
I and My girlfriend and I can give food to him at he, but we don’t can't cuddle him ! We think he have to needs of time for to trust us about we.

August 3, 2015
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