My plan of graduation trip Hello everyone,my name is Becky.I want to improve English ability because my English is not very well.Thanks for your direction. ^_____^ My plan of graduation trip Ever

Becky

My plan of graduation trip Hello everyone,my name is Becky.I want to improve English ability because my English is not very well.Thanks for your direction. ^_____^ My plan of graduation trip Ever since we were little,we've got many graduation trips that we can have a great tour memories with our classmates before graduation.Different from the modes that school took place in the past,we need to put on it in college and make the decisions,from the schedule to trip partners.It's free that all of things we have to decide by ourselves. A ademical career is gone in a moment,I will be a senior when the new semester start,It's time to plan a graduation trip with my friends.At the first,we need to choose a country which we want to go on a trip,and we choose Japan. Why did we choose this country?That's because Japan is not far to Taiwan,the airline ticket is cheaper than others countries.Their price is about the same in Taiwan,just a little expensive.Futher more,Japan has good public security and wonderful weather, it's right up our alley because of we are all girls.So we had the decision rapidly and selected two cities as targets－Kyoto and Osaka.Kyoto, Japan's ancient capital, filled with a deep sense of Japanese culture and customs which are very attractive; Osaka is a bustling and passionate city, which has a very famous playground－Universal Studios. After the travel location decided on, we started to plan trip.First,we create a Facebook group,and discussed the date of going abroad in next May.Next,we divided the project into four parts：airfare, accommodation, food and drink and play. Everyone will be assigned two projects, and have to collect informations on them. I chose the "accommodation" and "play".In accommodation,my friend lent me a magazine about Kyoto-style B&B and found several unique and beautiful one.As youth hostel for backpackers, the price of each room are not too expensive.I also found a Taiwanese opened B& B, maybe the owner can give us a lot of help.In play, the information I collected is not too much,I will work hard to find best places continually. In fact,plan early,we can have more time to resolve some unknown trouble. Long preparation compare favourably with short time. Hope I will have a nice graduation trip in Japan next year.

Aug 3, 2015 4:09 PM

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My graduation trip plan

Hello everyone, my name is Becky. I want to improve my English ability because my English is not very well good. Thanks for your direction help ^_____^

Ever since we were little, we've got been on many graduation trips that we can have a of which we have great memories great tour memories with our classmates before graduation. Different from the modes ways in which that school took place in the past, we need to put on it in go to college and make the decisions, from the schedule to trip partners. It's free that all of things we have to decide by ourselves ??? A ademical career is gone in a moment. I will be a senior when the new semester starts. It's time to plan a graduation trip with my friends. At the first, First of all, we needed to choose a country which we wanted to visit go on a trip,and we choose chose Japan.

Why did we choose this country? That's Because Japan is not far to from Taiwan, the airline ticket is cheaper than others countries. Their price is about the same in
Taiwan, just a little bit more expensive. Futhermore , Japan has good public security and wonderful weather; it's right up our alley because of we are all girls. So we had made the decision rapidly and selected two cities as targets－Kyoto and Osaka. Kyoto, Japan's ancient capital, is filled with a deep sense of Japanese culture and customs which are very attractive; Osaka is a bustling and passionate city, which has a very famous playground－Universal Studios.

After the travel location was decided on, we started to plan our trip. First, we created a Facebook group, and discussed the date of going abroad departure in next May.Next, we divided the project into four parts：airfare, accommodation, food and drink and play. Everyone will would be assigned two projects, and have to collect informations on about/ for them. I chose the "accommodation" and "play". In For accommodation, my friend lent me a magazine about Kyoto-style B&B and found several unique and beautiful ones. As a youth hostel for backpackers, the price of each room are was not too expensive. I also found a Taiwanese opened B& B; maybe the owner can could give us a lot of help. In play, the information I collected need to collect is not too much: I will work hard to find best better places continually.

In fact, if we plan early, we can have more time to resolve some unknown troubles. Long preparation compares favourably with a short time. ???
I hope I will have a nice graduation trip in Japan next year.

<em>This looks like it was written in Chinese and translated with google translate. It would be much better for you to attempt to write in English.</em>

August 3, 2015

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