Bruna
Help me praying for my cat I'm having hard days lately. Seven years ago, my friend brought me 3 cats he found at the street. My sister and i took care of them and found a home for two of them, the other cat we had keep for us. After all those years, i fell like he is my litlle son, i love him soo much! Unfortunatly my baby cat is now sick. After a lot of exames, they thing he might have cancer. I just can not believe because i was alwayas worried about his health and making shure that he never get a desease by taking him do to a check up once in the year, ginvin him the super premium food, but this i could not avoid! Now i pray for God, hopping that my baby recover from this! He is going to make a cirurgy after tomorrow! And i hope everything geta better! I wont lose my faith! I know he is going to be a fat cat again that run everywhere in my house!
Aug 3, 2015 9:29 PM
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Help me pray for my cat.

I'm having a hard time lately. Seven years ago, my friend brought me 3 cats he found on the street. My sister and I took care of them and found a home for two of them, the other cat we had to keep with us. After all those years, I feel like he is my little son, I love him soo much! Unfortunately my baby cat is now sick. After a lot of exams, the thing he might have is cancer. I just cannot believe it because I was always worried about his health and making sure that he never get a disease by taking him to do a check-up once a year, giving him super premium food, but this I could not avoid! Now I pray to God, hoping that my baby will recover from this! He is going to have surgery after tomorrow! And i hope everything gets better! I won't lose my faith! I know he is going to be a fat cat again that runs everywhere in my house!

August 3, 2015
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Help me pray for my cat

I'm having hard days a hard time lately. Seven years ago, my friend brought me 3 cats he found at on the street. My sister and I took care of them and found a home for two of them, and the other cat we had keep for us we kept the last cat for ourselves. After all those years, I feel like he is my little son, I love him soo much! Unfortunately my baby cat is now sick. After a lot of exames, they think he might have cancer. I just cannot/can't believe it, because I always worried about his health and made sure that he never got sick by taking him do to a check-up once in the a year, giving him the super premium food, but this I could not avoid! Now I pray for to God (<em>you pray TO God, FOR the cat</em>), hoping that my baby recovers (<em>or "will recover"</em>) from this! He is going to have surgery tomorrow! I hope everything gets better! I won't lose my faith! (<em>"I won't lose MY faith" is also correct, but it generally means on a larger scale-- as in, you will continue to be religious; "I won't lose faith" implies that you will continue to believe that your cat will be OK</em>). I know he is going to be a fat cat again, running everywhere in my house!

 

<em>I hope the surgery goes well and that you have many more years with your fat cat! </em>

August 3, 2015
Bruna, just a few typos and I also made some corrections using words that sound more natural in English. A cat I took care of died on Tuesday so I know how you feel. I hope your cat will get better.
August 3, 2015
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