Have you ever feel like don´t going out? I work in an office from Monday to Friday, usually I start working at 7:00 a.m. and I finish at 6:00, then I goto the gym and I arrive to my house at 9:00 p.m.

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Have you ever feel like don´t going out? I work in an office from Monday to Friday, usually I start working at 7:00 a.m. and I finish at 6:00, then I goto the gym and I arrive to my house at 9:00 p.m. On weekends, I visit my family and walk around the city, but yesterday I didn´t wanted to go out!. I just wanted to stay in my house and be quiet. Maybe sometimes is necesary to take a rest.

Aug 4, 2015 2:20 AM

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Have you ever felt like not going out?

I work in an office from Monday to Friday. I usually start working at 7:00 a.m. and finish at 6:00; then I go to the gym and arrive at my house at 9:00 p.m. On weekends, I visit my family and walk around the city; but yesterday I didn't want to go out! I just wanted to stay in my house and be quiet. Maybe sometimes it's necesary to take a rest.

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Nice job. A few explanations:

The use of ; is to avoid run-on sentences, or to show a break in the thought (for example, in the "On weekends" sentence). It also changes from present tense (visit) to past (didn't want).

"be quiet" works, but maybe a better way is to say "have some peace and quiet"

And yes, sometimes home is the best place to be! (Let me know if the exp.s are unclear.)

August 5, 2015

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