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IELTS TEST TASK 1 WRITING The table shows figures about consumer spending on different products in five different countries in 2002. Apprantly,the consumption of items,like food,drinks and tobacco were the largest spending among these five countries, and Turkey even stays at the top place in this table with 32.14%. In addition, the spending of clothing and footwear is also a big part of people's daily purchasing.However, the Italian cost more on this item compared with other countries with 9%. But in general, all of these countries don't spend more than 10% of their money on this kind of items.Besides, people usually spend less on leisure and education,except Turkey with 4.35%. To sum up, people from these countries cost relatively more on what they eat on daily basis.While the spend of wearing and leisure only share a small proportion of total spending.
Aug 4, 2015 2:27 AM
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IELTS TEST TASK 1 WRITING

The table below shows figures about consumer spending on different products in five different countries in 2002.
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Apparently, the consumption of items like food, drinks, and tobacco were the largest spending among these five countries. Turkey even stays at the top place in this table with 32.14%.

In addition, the spending of clothing and footwear is also a big part of people's daily purchasing. However, Italy spends more on this item compared with other countries, with a 9% spending rate. In general, all of these countries don't spend more than 10% of their money on items such as these. Besides, people usually spend less on leisure and education - except Turkey with 4.35% spending percentage.

To sum up, people from these countries spend relatively more on what they eat on a daily basis while what they spend on clothing and leisure shares only a small proportion of total spending.


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August 5, 2015
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