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Sunny and hot days. As summer is drawing near,the temperature in Wuhan is going up.The sun shines into my window makes me happy.My mom told me not to go out in this weather conditon.But I wonder wheather we can put off the military training or not.It's so hot here,I don't want to be sun-burnt and be that tired.
Aug 4, 2015 3:46 AM
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Sunny and hot days.

 

As summer is drawing near, the temperature in Wuhan is going up. (this sentence seems ok, but this way seems more natural: As the summer draws near, the temperature in Wuhan is going up) The sun shines into through my window, which makes me happy. My mom told me not to go out in this weather conditon. (no need to add condition here) I wonder But I wonder wheather we can put off the whether military training will be postponed or not. It's so hot here, I don't want to be get sunburnt sun-burnt and be that tired.

August 4, 2015
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