おはよう！

What I did yesterday.

Hi. I'm a Japanese 4th year college student . My major is law, but I'm studying English privately by myself. So, I'm I would be happy if you correct my notebook when I was am wrong.

I woke up at 7 am. After having breakfast, I memorized some English words. Then I talked on skype with my friend who is from New Zealand in English. It was very difficult to hear him speaking in English, but it was very excited!
And then I played video games for 2 hours in the afternoon. Then I performed went to my part time job. Thank you.

By the way, if you like to listen to music, please recommend me your favorite English song.
I like to listen to music too and I want to improve my hearing skills.

I don't listen to much English music, so I can't help you there. Hope you get other replies~

そのニュージーランド人、どんな人だった？

What I did yesterday.

Hi. I'm a Japanese 4th year college student . My major is law, but I'm studying English privately. So,I'll be happy if you can correct my notebook when I was am wrong. [or "when I make mistakes"]

I woke up at 7 am. After having breakfast, I memorized some English words. Then I talked on Skype with my friend who is from New Zealand in English. It was very difficult to hear understand him speaking in English, but it was very exciting!

[I think you mean understand. Very difficult to hear means there is no sound (or it's very quiet)...]

And I played video games for 2 hours in the afternoon, then I performed went to my part time job. Thank you. 

By the way, if you like to listen to music, please recommend tell me your favorite English song.

[or "what are some of your favorite songs?" For some reason, we don't usually say "recommend your favorite". "recommend me" isn't correct, you have to say "recommend to me"...such as: "please recommend some good songs in English to me"]

I like to listen to music too and I want to improve my hearing listening skills.

[What kind of music do you like, Taro?] 

What I did yesterday.

Hi. I'm a Japanese 4th college student . My major is law,but I'm studyng English privately. So,I'm happy if you correct my notebook when I was wrong.

I woke up at 7 am. After having breakfast, I memorized some English words. Then I talked on skype with my friend who is from New Zealand in English.It was very difficult to hear him speaking in English,but it was very excited!
And I played video games for 2 hours in the afternoon. Then I performed my part time job. Thank you.

By the way,If you like to listen to music, please recommend me your favorite English song.
I like to listen to music too and I want to improve my hearing skills.