Sanny
My Prayer Dear God, God will you let him know that I love him so. When there is no one there that he is not alone. Just close his eyes and let him know... My heart...is beating with his... My God, you know something? Why the right one does not understand me well? Is that I haven't told him yet? I know someday that the right one will be by my side. Couse I know God is just waiting till the time is right. My God, you know something? Why there is no one help me correct my English notebook? just kidding:) Is that I wrote it too boring? You know I am strugle in learning English. Thanks so much. love U Sanny
Aug 4, 2015 6:51 AM
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My Prayer

Dear God,

God will you let him know that I love him so.
When there is no one there that he is not alone.
Just close his eyes and let him know...
My heart...is beating with his...

My God, you know something?
Why doesn't the right one does not understand me well?
Is it that I haven't told him yet?

I know someday that the right one will be by my side.
'Cause I know God is just waiting 'till the time is right.

My God, you know something?
Why is it there is no one help me correct my English notebook? just kidding:)
Is it that what I wrote is too boring?
You know I am struggling to learn English. (You know I struggle with English)

Thanks so much.

love U
Sanny

 

Hey Sanny, God sent me to fix your notebook. The rest will have to be someone else's job :)

 

Also ...

When you abbreviate words, add a ' -> 'till = until, 'cause = because 

 

August 4, 2015
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