Elena
The last month of Summer I like Summer more than other seasons of the year. Because it's time of rest, fun, crazy things! You can spend more time with friends, enjoy the nature, you can be free! Also I have my birthday in Summer :) So, now is the last month of Summer, it's a little sad for me. I really want to enjoy this beautiful days and on Friday I'm going to go to the river called Desna. It's very beautiful place, really! I'm going to spend these few days perfectly.
Aug 4, 2015 5:23 PM
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I like your post, and I wish you a marvelous day in your birthday many many happiness in your special day!!! Sound great to take a long travel around the lake Deana in company with your friends!!! You know is the funniest plan of summer!!!
August 5, 2015

The last month of Summer

I like Summer more than other seasons of the year (no period) because it's time of rest, fun, and crazy things! You can spend more time with friends, enjoy the nature, you can and be free! Also I have my birthday in Summer My birthday is also in the summer :) So, now that it is the last month of Summer, it's a little sad for me. I feel a little sad. I really want to enjoy this these beautiful days. and  On Friday, I'm going to go to the river called Desna. It really is a very beautiful place. really! I'm going to spend these few days perfectly.    Pretty good, keep it up!

August 4, 2015

The last month of summer

I like summer more than the other seasons of the year. Because it's a time of rest, fun, and crazy things! You can spend more time with friends, enjoy the nature, and you can be free! Also I have my birthday in Summer :) So, now is the last month of summer, it's a little sad for me. I really want to enjoy the beautiful days of summer and on Friday I'm going to go to a river called Desna. It's very beautiful place, really! I'm going to spend these next few days perfectly.

 

Exellent job on your English, very, very minor errors, and almost unnoticeable. Great job and keep up that good work!

August 4, 2015

The last month of Summer

I like Summer more than other seasons of the year. Because it's time of rest, fun, crazy things! You can spend more time with friends, enjoy the nature, you can be free! Also I have my birthday in Summer :) So, now is the last month of Summer, it was a little sad for me. I really want to enjoy this beautiful days and on Friday I was  going on the river called Desna. It's very beautiful place, really! I'm going to spend few days perfectly.

August 4, 2015
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