Edward Malone
Among the dark... He woke and found himself in a dark forest at middle of the night. -Where am I? I remember I was going to my bed in my room... Later I began to sleep. Some nightmares came to me. Maybe this is one of them? Yes, it is a nightmare. But what is it a place? Only many trees was located around him. Only clear night sky gave a few of light... But the sky was without the moon. The charachter decided to move. He went to any side hoping on (for) luck. Suddenly a wild screem sounded from back side...
Aug 4, 2015 8:16 PM
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He woke and found himself in a dark forest in the middle of the night. (but: <em>at</em> midnight)
-Where am I? I remember I was going to my bed in my room... Later I began to sleep / fell asleep. I was having nightmares. Maybe this is one of them? Yes, it is a nightmare. But what is this place?
Located around him were only trees / He was surrounded only by many trees. Only clear night sky gave a little light... But the sky was without the moon / but there was no moon in the sky. The charachter decided to move. He went in any direction, hoping for (some) luck. Suddenly, a wild scream sounded from behind / Suddenly, there was a wild scream behind him / Suddenly, there came a wild scream from behind...

August 4, 2015
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