QA #6 Are you good at swimming? Although many people say I have no sense of sports and I totally agree that, I loved swimming and I was good at it somehow in the old day. I hated P.E. classes in my sc

Masato Hatayama

QA #6 Are you good at swimming? Although many people say I have no sense of sports and I totally agree that, I loved swimming and I was good at it somehow in the old day. I hated P.E. classes in my school age because I couldn't do most of sports well and my classmates made fun of me. But during the swimming class in middle of summer reversed that situation. I could swim better than most of my classmates who usually laughed at me. Unfortunately, I haven't swum for over ten years (there's no pool near my room!) and I don't know whether I can do well today.

Aug 4, 2015 11:23 PM

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Great work - I really enjoyed the way you have written this, using interested sentence structures that were all so close to being perfect.

Kepe up the hard work, Tom

QA #6 Are you good at swimming?

Although many people say I have no sense of talent for sports and I totally agree with that, I loved swimming and I somehow was good at it somehow in the old days. I hated P.E. classes in my school age years because I couldn't do most of the sports well and my classmates made fun of me, but during the swimming classes in the middle of summer reversed that situation reversed. I could swim better than most of those my classmates who usually laughed at me. Unfortunately, I haven't swum for over ten years (there's no pool near my room!) and I don't know whether I can still swim do so well today.