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Fiction Movies I like the cinema so much. I like almost all the genre but the most I like it is fiction or sci-fi. When I was young I read spiderman's comics and perhaps is for it that super heros movies attract me. Recently, I did see the first trilogy of spiderman againg. It was directed by Sam Raimi. The character of spiderman is like I remembered. There was time ago but I thought that the comics character was more depresive for all happened in his life. He learned that a great power comes with a great responsability and for that, he was too responsible.
Aug 5, 2015 8:22 AM
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Fiction Movies (tiene sentido pero nadie dice "fiction movies" porque ¡casi todas de las pelis son de ficción!)

I like the cinema so much. (Otra vez, tiene sentido pero yo diría "I like the movies" en EEUU, creo que "films" es común en Inglatera)
I like almost all the genres but my favorite is the most I like it is fiction or sci-fi.
When I was young I read Spider-Man's comics and perhaps for that reason is for it that super heros superhero movies attract me.
Recently, I did see saw the first trilogy of spiderman againg (qué es againg?). It was directed by Sam Raimi.

The character of Spider-Man is like as I remembered. There was time It was a while ago but I thought that the comics character was more depresive for (no estoy seguro que sea la mejor palabra aquí, yo diría algo mas poético como "tortured") due to all that has happened in his life. He learned that a great power comes with a great responsibility and for that, he was too responsible (no entiendo lo que quieres decir aquí).

 

¡Buen ensayo! Esta gramática es un poco complicada. Apuesto que has escrito "for that" como una traducción de "por eso". Normalmente no se puede decir "for that", hay muchas traducciones de "por eso" pero el mas común es "so". "I hurt my back, so I can't play basketball today."

August 5, 2015
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