George
what fools around comes around 望月同碗羹汤。 星斗同满手盐。 空腹是不好诗人。
Aug 5, 2015 9:49 AM
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what fools around comes around

望月同碗羹汤。               月圆如美羹汤
星斗同满手盐。               星斗似满手盐
空腹是不好诗人。            腹空非好诗人

August 5, 2015
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what fools around comes around

望月同碗羹汤。
星斗同满手盐。
空腹是不好诗人。

 

I suggest it is like this 


望羹汤中的月亮,
见星斗也在其中。
只凭表面的美丽,

诗人仍是腹中空。(就像山中的竹笋,中间是空的,Like bamboo shoots in the mountains, the middle is empty,Metaphor people have no talent)

August 5, 2015
a stimulating poem.
August 5, 2015
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