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My holidays in Croatia I have spent the last week in Croatia for holidays, so I would talk about my impression of this country. The sea is beautiful but beaches aren't sandy, they are full of stones. It's dangerous walk without sandals because you could hit your feet. In addiction, beaches are very small, so you have to stay really close with the other person. If you arrive late, the beach could be already full and you have to find another one. The second aspect which have hit my attention is the hinterland: it's ininhabited. We have travelled for kilometers and kilometers, but between cities there isn't nothing, except for some house probably occupied by farmer. This fact have made me curiosly, so I have searched on google the population of Croatia and I was impressed: Croatia have only 4 million of people. This was a really shock for me because the only hinterland of Milan have about 7 million of people who live in. However, landscapes of Croatia are beautiful. All around you can see threes, green grass and hills. We went also at Plitvice, a national park with amazing waterfalls (let's look the image I have loaded!). We walked for 16 kilmeters, but the our effort was repay. Thanks for help and if you have been in Croatia tell me what you think about.
Aug 16, 2015 10:18 PM
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My holidays in Croatia

I<em> spent</em> the last week in Croatia for<em> </em><em>the</em> <em>holidays</em>, so I <em>would like to</em> talk about my <em>impressions</em> of this country.

The sea is beautiful but <em>the </em>beaches aren't sandy, they are full of <em>rocks</em>. It's dangerous <em>to </em>walk without sandals because you could <em>hurt</em> your feet. In <em>addition</em>, <em>the </em>beaches are very small, so you have to stay really close <em>to</em> the other <em>people</em>. If you arrive late, the beach <em>may</em> be already full and you <em>might </em>have to find another one.

The second aspect which<em> hit</em> my attention is the hinterland: it's ininhabited. <em>We travelled</em> for kilometers and kilometers, but <em>among</em> cities there <em>is</em> nothing, except for some <em>houses</em> probably occupied by <em>farmers</em>. This fact made me <em>curious</em>, so <em>I searched</em> the population of Croatia <em>on google</em> and I was impressed: Croatia <em>has</em> only 4 <em>million people</em>. This was a <em>real</em> shock for me because the only hinterland of Milan <em>has</em> about 7 <em>million people</em> who live in <em>it</em>.

However, <em>the </em>landscapes of Croatia are beautiful. All around you can see <em>trees</em>, green grass and hills. We went also <em>to</em> Plitvice, a national park with amazing waterfalls (<em>have a</em> look <em>at </em>the image I have loaded!). We walked for 16 kilmeters, but our effort was paid off.

Thanks for <em>your </em>help and if you have been <em>to</em> Croatia tell me what you think about <em>it.

I would have published this note in the English session, because even though you are Italian, it is written in English. Ciao! </em>

August 17, 2015

My Holidays in Croatia (You had one holiday.  Even if the holiday was more than one day, it is still holiday.) 

I have spent the last week in Croatia for holidays, so I would will talk about my impression of this country.

The sea is beautiful, but beaches aren't sandy., They are full of stones. It's dangerous to walk without sandals, because you could hit your feet on the rocks. In addiction, the beaches are very small, so you have to stay really close with to the other person. people.  If you arrive late, the beach could be already full, and you would have to find another one.

The second aspect thing which that got  have hit my attention is was (your story is about the past) the hinterland: it's ininhabited uninhabited  (Un means not, so not inhabited.) We have had travelled for kilometers and kilometers, but between cities there isn't nothingwasn't anything (use anything when you are negating the sentence) except for some house probably occupied by farmer. (How many houses?  Just one?  except for a house that was probably...  or more than one house?  except for some houses that were probably...) This fact have made me curiosly, so I googled have searched on google (google is now a verb, so you can say I googled to mean I searched the internet) the population of Croatia, and I was impressed! Croatia have has (Croatia is a thing, so it has ) only 4 million of people. (OR  Croatia has a population of only 4 million.) This was a really a shock for me, because the only hinterland of Milan have has only about 7 million of people. who live in.

However, landscapes of Croatia are beautiful. All around, you can see threes, green grass, and hills. We, also, went also at to Plitvice, a national park with amazing waterfalls (let's look at the image I have loaded!). We walked for 16 kilmeters, but the our effort was repay and later, we were really sore.

Thanks for your help. and If you have been in to Croatia, tell me what you think thought about it.  ...please share with me your thoughts about it.

August 31, 2015
Yes! This was just one of many :)
August 31, 2015
Beautiful waterfalls. Did you take this picture?
August 31, 2015
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