Nakon Prve
Ja sam iz Amerike, z želim ići u ci Srbiju i erbia i Hrvatsku (dative case) i a viditi videti moje a prijatelje(you can also say: frendove). i. Sada, ja radim puno pa nisam e imao puno vremena mnogo sati da vježbam vjazbao onoliko koliko bih z želeo. im. j Ja volim nove jes jezike, i hrvatski i srpski su mi na prvom mjestu. e. Pa, Idemo prica hajde da pričamo.
I am from America, I want to go to Serbia and Croatia to see my friends. Now I work alot so not much time to exercise like I want. I like new languages and Croatian/Serbian are 1st. So, Lets talk!
Negative sentences are always written separatly:
Ja ne radim - I do not work
Ja ne spavam - I do not sleep
Ja ne pišem - I do not write
etc
EXCEPTIONS:
Nemoj - Don't
Nisam - I'm not
Neću - I don't want
Nemam - I don't have
For example:
Nemoj me zvati, neću da izađem sa tobom. - Don't call me, I don't want to go out with you.
Ja nisam tvoj prijatelj i nemam vremena za tebe. - I'm not your friend and I have no time for you.
Ok, really nice job.
Just, it is not so necessary to repeat "JA" like it is the case in ENglish. I would do this excercise like this:
Ja sam iz Amerike. Želim ići u Srbiju i Hrvatsku i videti moje frendove. Sada radim puno pa nisam imao puno vremena da vježbam onoliko koliko bih želeo. Volim nove jezike, srpski i hrvatski su mi na prvom mjestu. Pa, hajde da pričamo.
Talk to you on Saturday, let me know if you have any questions.
Have a nice day.