Giovanni
Music Okay, I don't know I must to begin. I think I do a lot of mistakes when I write in english, but I have to, hahah!!! Today I wnat to speak you something that have changed my life: MUSIC! "Music's the reason why I know time still exist": this is a phrase of my favourite Italian Singer! When I heard Music, my life change! When I sing, around me, I put my arms and my eyes around Music! So I dance in the room, If I was in the woods with music! Okay, stop ahahah
Aug 28, 2015 9:29 AM
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Music

Okay, I don't know I must to begin. [I don't know how to begin.]
I think I domake a lot of mistakes when I write in eEnglish, but I have to, hahah!!! [fare vuole dire "to do" e "to make" allora si deve stare attento al contesto.]
Today I wnat to speakwant to tell you something[o, "to speak to you about something] that hasve changed my life: MUSIC!
"Music's the reason why I know time still exists": this is a phrasesaying of my favourite Italian Singer! [si scrive "favorite" in inglese americano]
When I first heard Music, my life changed!
When I sing, around me, I put my arms around myself and my eyes around Music!
So I dance in themy room, Ias if I waswere in the woods with music! [Il congiuntivo, o "the subjunctive" in inglese.]
Okay, I'll stop now. ahahah

August 28, 2015
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