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IELTS Writing TASK 1. FORMAL LETTER Hello again! This time I have done another writing from the IELTS test. It would be great if someone could check it again for me! thanks!! YOU LIVE IN A ROO IN COLLEGE WHICH YOU SHARE WITH ANOTHER STUDENT. HOWEVER, THERE ARE MANY PROBLEMS WITH ARRANGEMENT AND YOU FIND IT VERY DIFFICULT TO WORK. WRITE A LETTER TO THE ACCOMMODATION OFFICER AT THE COLLEGE. IN THE LETTER: -DESCRIBE THE SITUATION -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEMS AND WHY IT IS DIFFICULT TO WORK -SAY WHAT KIND OF ACCOMMODATION YOU WOULD PREFER. Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter with reference to some issues that I have been having recently, in particular at night in your lodge, As you may already be aware of, I am currently enrolled in a Spanish course and working part-time in a private language school. I teach General English and Business English. Under those circumstances, I only have time to study at night. On the other hand, I am sharing this accommodation with another student, The main problem is that my mate is attending a dramatic arts course, therefore, he needs to speak louder when he is practicing. This would not have been a problem for me if I was not in the middle of my exams. Thus, I would like to ask you for another accommodation in this college. It would be great if I could stay by my- self in this period of time. I highly need to pass these exams if I want to get the grant. I hope you my request will take a consideration. Your Faithfully
Aug 28, 2015 12:41 PM
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IELTS Writing TASK 1. FORMAL LETTER

Hello again!
This time I have done another writing from the IELTS test.
It would be great if someone could check it again for me! thanks!!

YOU LIVE IN A ROOM  IN COLLEGE WHICH YOU SHARE WITH ANOTHER STUDENT. HOWEVER, THERE ARE MANY PROBLEMS WITH ARRANGEMENT AND YOU FIND IT VERY DIFFICULT TO WORK.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE ACCOMMODATION OFFICER AT THE COLLEGE. IN THE LETTER:
-DESCRIBE THE SITUATION
-EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEMS AND WHY IT IS DIFFICULT TO WORK
-SAY WHAT KIND OF ACCOMMODATION YOU WOULD PREFER.

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter with reference to some issues that I have been having recently, in particular at night in my shared accommodation
As you may already be aware of, I am currently enrolled in a Spanish course and working part-time in a private language school. I teach General English and Business English. Under those circumstances, I only have time to study at night.

However since  I am sharing this accommodation with another student, my  main problem is that my roommate ,who is enrolled in  a dramatic arts course, needs to speak aloud when he is practicing. This would not have been a problem for me if I was not in the middle of my exams.

Thus, I would like to ask you for another accommodation in this college. It would be great if I could live  alone  in this period of time. I urgently  need to pass these exams if I want to get the grant.

I hope you my request will take a consideration.
Your Faithfully

August 28, 2015

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IELTS Writing TASK 1. FORMAL LETTER

Hello again!
This time I have done another writing from the IELTS test.
It would be great if someone could check it again for me! thanks!!

YOU LIVE IN A ROO IN COLLEGE WHICH YOU SHARE WITH ANOTHER STUDENT. HOWEVER, THERE ARE MANY PROBLEMS WITH ARRANGEMENT AND YOU FIND IT VERY DIFFICULT TO WORK.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE ACCOMMODATION OFFICER AT THE COLLEGE. IN THE LETTER:
-DESCRIBE THE SITUATION
-EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEMS AND WHY IT IS DIFFICULT TO WORK
-SAY WHAT KIND OF ACCOMMODATION YOU WOULD PREFER.

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter with reference to some issues that I have been having recently, in particular at night in your lodge,
As you may already be aware of, I am currently enrolled in a Spanish course and working part-time in a private language school. I teach General English and Business English. Under those circumstances, I only have time to study at night.

On the other hand, I am sharing this accommodation with another student, The main problem is that my mate is attending a dramatic arts course, therefore, he needs to speak louder when he is practicing. This would not have been a problem for me if I was not in the middle of my exams.

Thus, I would like to ask you for another accommodation in this college. It would be great if I could stay by my- self in this period of time. I highly need to pass these exams if I want to get the grant.

I hope you my request will take a consideration.
Your Faithfully

August 28, 2015
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