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Please, help me to correct these sentences My parents are 77 years old. They live in 600 km from Moscow. My mother is ill (the defects of the heart valve). The doctors recommended an operation, but she think she will not to stand it ( ?) because she is 77 years old. The optimism and medicine are helping her to be alive. I am very worried about her. I do all my best for her. But I can't make her healthy. This thought is just killing me. I can't adopt this thought... I try to give her my attention. I know it is the most important thing which she need. I talk with her every night by Skype. I would like to move my parents to my flat ( I live in block house on the third floor), but they love their house, garden, and place where they live all their life. The nature gives them energy to be alive. I love my parents, I want them to live a long lives.
Aug 28, 2015 5:11 PM
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Please, help me to correct these sentencesThanks!


My parents are 77 years old. They live in 600 km from Moscow. My mother is ill ( not well due to a the defects of the heart valve defect). The Doctors recommended an operation, but she thinks she will not to stand it ( ?) make it because of her age. she is 77 years old. Grammatically not incorrect but you have already told us in the first sentence.  Better to express this way.  The Her optimism and the medicine are helping her to be alive. Understood I am very worried about her. I do all my best what I can do This is better since you are not there with her. I'm sure she wants you be by her side. :) for her. but I can't make return her to her healthy state. This very thought is just /unbearable to/killing/ me. I can't adopt stop this thinking or "I cannot stop this thought" thought... I try to give her my attention. which I know it is the most important thing which she needs. I talk chat with her every night by through/with Skype. I would like to move have my parents move into my flat ( I live in block house which is on the third floor), but However, they love their house, the garden, and the places where they live know all their life. The surrounding nature gives them the energy to be alive. I love my parents and I want them to live have a long life lives.

August 28, 2015
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Please, help me to correct these sentences.

 

My parents are 77 years old. They live in 600 km from Moscow. My mother is ill. (She has a defective heart valve.) The doctors have recommended an operation, but she doesn't think she will survive it ( ?) because she is 77 years old. Her optimism and medicine are helping her to be alive. I am very worried about her. I do all my best for her. But I can't make her healthy. This thought is just killing me. I can't adopt this thought stop worrying about her... I try to give her my attention. I know it is the most important thing which she needs. I talk with her every night by Skype. I would like to move my parents to my flat ( I live in a block house on the third floor), but they love their house, garden, and the place where they have lived all their life. Nature gives them th energy to be alive. I love my parents, I want them to live a long lives.

 

Hello

 

I understand your problems as my father is also very old and I have suggested he move to close to me and my family but he doesn't want to leave the house where he has lived for the past 50 years.

 

There are a few small mistakes in this text but everything is understandable. We usually say 'I don't think I will ....' rather than 'I think I won't'

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

August 28, 2015
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