Ana Maria
Colombia/ Venezuela I fell bad for the situation between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brothers countrys. Colombia has nice people and we love. I want this to end soon.
Aug 29, 2015 2:21 AM
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Colombia/ Venezuela

I felt bad for the situation between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brother countries. Colombia has nice people and we love each other. I want this to end soon.

August 29, 2015

Colombia/ Venezuela

I feel bad for about the situation [what situation?] between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brothers countries. Colombia has nice people and we love each other. I want this [what is 'this'?] to end soon.

 

Notes

I feel bad*
The border conflict was not in the past, it is currently ongoing. Use the present tense.  You didn't feel bad in the past, you feel bad now.

 

Also, note the word soon isn't necessary in this example.
I want this conflict to end.
I want this conflict to end soon.

 

Situation and this

Try replacing vague words to communicate more clearly and to make more descriptive sentences.

 

For example you could write:

I feel bad about the escalating border tensions between Venezuela and Colombia because we are brother countries. Colombia has nice people and we love each other. I want this conflict to end.

 

I hope this helps!!!

August 29, 2015
Why is the situation bad?
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