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Learning some new English words Since recent time I manhandle myself to make my English vocabulary be thriven. According to a statistics I've learnt 160 new English words. But I suspect that they are put into passive vocabulary. Therefore with the object of pulling them to active vocabulary I compel myself to write here using some of these words.My efforts ascend with a grating. I feel I butcher my unruli brain sometimes, but I think this is nessesary to attain a level when it will be my ithos. ps The entry looks strange at least. It is just insufficient imagination in using new words.
Aug 29, 2015 7:32 AM
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Выделяю ошибки красным, а стилистику синим.

 

Learning some new English words

In recent times, I have manhandled [1] myself to make my English vocabulary thrive. According to a personal statistics, I've learnt 160 new English words. But I suspect that they became part of my passive vocabulary. Therefore, with the object of transferring them into my active vocabulary, I am forcing/compelling myself to write here using some of these words here.  My efforts ascend with a grating. [?? 2]  I feel I butcher my unruly brain sometimes, but I think it is nessesary in order to attain a level when it [?? 3] will become my ethos.

PS
The entry looks strange, at the very least. It is just my insufficient imagination in using new words.

 

[1]  Use the "present perfect tense" when an action started in the past and continues until the present moment.

[2]  It is hard to understand the sentence "My efforts...."  If you paraphrase in English or write the sentence is Russian, I'll try again to help.

[3]  I'm not sure what "it" refers to.  

August 29, 2015

Learning some new English words

Since recent times I manhandle myself to make my English vocabulary be thriven. According to a the statistics I've learnt 160 new English words. But I suspect that they are put into passive vocabulary. Therefore with the object of pulling them to active vocabulary I compel myself to write here using some of these words. My efforts ascend with a grating. I feel I butcher my unruli brain sometimes, but I think this is nessesary to attain a level when it will be my ithos.

ps
The entry looks strange at least. It is just insufficient imagination in using new words.

August 29, 2015
(: @ZetaZhang
August 29, 2015
You are not alone.I am trying to improve my English,too.:)
August 29, 2015
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