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SHAVED ICE Have you ever eaten shaved ice? I write about shaved ice in Japan. I think most of the Japanese people have a shaved ice machine. As being on Summer, they make shaved ice by themselves in their home. And I have also the machine, but I can't make shaved ice ,because my fridge is out of order ;) So, I can't make ice cubes for shaved ice. That's why, I don't eat shaved ice for a few years. In Japan, there is shaved ice that your head don't come to ache! I would try it on this summer vacation but I couldn't try it ;)) So, I'll try it on next summer vacation! ((I'm looking forward to eating it!)) If you have ever tried it, let me hear how you feel about the shaved ice!! <<Japanese Ver>> かき氷を食べたことはありますか。 今日は、日本のかき氷についてお話したいと思います。 多くの日本の家庭に、かき氷機があると思います。 ですから、夏になると家でかき氷を自分で作ったりもします。 私も、かき氷機を持っていますが、私の家にある冷蔵庫が故障中で、かき氷用の氷を作れないので、かき氷を作ることができません。 ここ数年かき氷を食べていないんです;)) 日本には、頭が痛くならないとかき氷があります。 私は今年の夏にそのかき氷を食べてみようと思っていましたが、できませんでした。 来年こそは食べたいです! ((そのかき氷を食べるのが楽しみです。!)) もし、そのかき氷を食べたことがある方は是非感想を聞かせてくださいネ。
Aug 29, 2015 12:11 PM
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SHAVED ICE

Have you ever eaten shaved ice?
I will write about shaved ice in Japan.

I think most of the Japanese people have a shaved ice machine.
In Summer, they make shaved ice by themselves in their homes.
And I have also have a machine, but I can't make shaved ice, because my fridge is out of order ;)
So, I can't make ice cubes for shaved ice.
That's why, I haven't eaten shaved ice for a few years.

In Japan, there is shaved ice that doesn't make your head hurt!*
I wanted to try it on this summer vacation but I couldn't try it ;))
So, I'll try it on next summer vacation!
((I'm looking forward to eating it!))

If you have ever tried it, let me hear how you feel about the shaved ice!!

 

*You can also say "that doesn't give you brain freeze".  It's fun, common slang.

Good job! I also love shaved ice :) 

August 29, 2015
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SHAVED ICE

Have you ever eaten shaved ice?
I will write about shaved ice in Japan.

I think most of the Japanese people have a shaved ice machine.
As being on In Summer, they make shaved ice by themselves in their at home. →'at home' sounds more natural here :)
And I have also have the machine, but I can't make shaved ice ,because my fridge is out of order ;)
So, I can't make ice cubes for shaved ice. 

That's why, I don't eat haven't eaten shaved ice for a few years.

In Japan, there is shaved ice that won't make your head don't come to ache!
I would wanted to try it on this summer vacation but I couldn't try it ;))
So, I'll try it on next summer vacation!
((I'm looking forward to eating it!))

If you have ever tried it, let me hear how you feel about the shaved ice!!

<<Japanese Ver>>
かき氷を食べたことはありますか。
今日は、日本のかき氷についてお話したいと思います。

多くの日本の家庭に、かき氷機があると思います。
ですから、夏になると家でかき氷を自分で作ったりもします。
私も、かき氷機を持っていますが、私の家にある冷蔵庫が故障中で、かき氷用の氷を作れないので、かき氷を作ることができません。
ここ数年かき氷を食べていないんです;))

日本には、頭が痛くならないとかき氷があります。
私は今年の夏にそのかき氷を食べてみようと思っていましたが、できませんでした。
来年こそは食べたいです!
((そのかき氷を食べるのが楽しみです。!))

もし、そのかき氷を食べたことがある方は是非感想を聞かせてくださいネ。

August 29, 2015
It is so delicious! So, when you visit to Japan, please try it!
September 1, 2015
I have never eaten shaved ice, but I would like to! \(^○^)/
August 29, 2015
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