My weekend

Staying up late last night made me very sleepy now, and coffee doesn't work for me now.
I watched a movie about Margaret Thatcher last night, it really encouraged me. It is fantastic that sometimes we are encouraged by an idol, sometimes by a book, sometimes by a song, sometimes by a story and sometimes by a movie. If we know what kind of things can inspire us, we will always figure out when we are lazy, depressed, disappointed or frustrated.
Today I am going to church, I have been there 3 times and I hope I can stick to it.
Wish you all a nice weekend.

Hello Echo,

I haven't seen the movie about Margaret Thatcher but I was a teenager when she came to power and I know that she did a lot of good for the country but now I think in some ways she went too far. (People have many different views of the Iron Lady, everyone is enitiled to their opinion.)

Your writing is fine, if we are using a verb as part of the subject of a verb then you should use the -ing form of the subject verb. When you have lists of things you separate them with a comma (as you did) but the last items will be separated by a word like 'and' or 'or'.

Hope this  helps

Bob

My weekend

Staying up late last night makes me very sleepy now,and drinking coffee doesn't work .
I watched a movie about Margaret Thatcher last night;it really encouraged me. It is amazing how sometimes we can be encouraged by an idol, a book, a song, a story or a movie. If we know the things that inspire us,we can use them to help us through when we are lazy,depressed,disappointed,frustrated.etc
Today I am going to church and i have been there 3 times  . I hope I can stick to that . 
Wish you all nice weekends.