The best place to live in Spain.

Talk about the best place to live in your country. What are the reasons why you have chosen this place? Suggest activities that single people in their twenties and couples in their sixties can do if they visit this place.

I think that the best place to live in my country is Almeria. I have lived in this city all my life, apart from when I was studying in Seville for five years which is beautiful, but I prefer to live in Almeria.

It is mild in the winter and not too hot in the summer.

It isn't too cold in the winter and isn't too hot in the summer.

The weather isn´t very cold in the winter and it´s not very hot in the summer here.

-This sentence is not technically incorrect, but above are some suggested alternatives. When referring to the temperature, you needen't mention 'weather' as it is implied.

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In general, it has a temperate climate. There is a cathederal and a 10th century castle that people both young and old can visit and enjoy. The best thing here, though, is our Tapas. You can go out to eat ‘tapas’ to many bars and this is very cheap because you can get a beer with a tapa for two euros. 

In addition, we have many beaches too where you can where you can swim if you like to. If you're feeling energetic then you could play beach volleyball or beach tennis and if not, there is a beautiful view from the walk along the promenade.

In short, as far as I'm concerned, Almeriais the best place in Spain because is my city.

Could you correct me, please?

Hey! Many of the green is suggestion.

I have ommited the mentioning of ages: often something like this is implied. You wouldn't see it written out specifically in a travel brochure, for example: just by having the variety you are including those people. It is up to you, but it would not be common to have it written out like that.

I have also changed the order of some of your sentences so that it flows better. You can decide how you like it.