Family

Hi Becky,
I could’t answer you before because I was in a family trip.

It was great to hear you again.

(It was great to hear from you again, if the person only wrote to you, and you didn't actually speak to the person).

My family are is very similar in appearance because we’re have medium-height, brown-haired and fair skin.

Howerver, my older brother is very well-built because he loves practicing tennis.

Although we’re siblings, our personalities are very different. I’m a cheerful girl and I like making new friends, but he’s really shy and mean;, he’s never shared anything with me.

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Despite his behavior, I love him and he’s the best brother.
What do you think about this? Do you have a good relationship with your siblings?
All the best,
Miriam