smoking I’ve been smoking for more than 10 years. I didn’t like my father’s smoky taste, and he died of liver cancer due to drink too much liquor since I was 14 years old. Once I thought I never smo

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smoking I’ve been smoking for more than 10 years. I didn’t like my father’s smoky taste, and he died of liver cancer due to drink too much liquor since I was 14 years old. Once I thought I never smoke because of his dying, but now I am doing what he did. I tried to quit smoking last Saturday, because I wanted to become a better man. Although I couldn't quit it right away, I’ve reduced one-third. I’m keeping away temptation that makes me want to smoke, and I hope that I will make it.

Aug 31, 2015 3:44 AM

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非常好。很好读。

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I’ve been smoking for more than 10 years.

I didn’t like my father’s smoky taste smell, and he died of liver cancer when I was 14 years old due to drink because he drank too much liquor since when I was 14 years old.

这是“taste"还是”smell"？

你十四岁的时候你父亲死了？还是从你十四岁的时候你父亲喝太多了？

Once I thought I would never smoke because of his dying, but now I am doing what he did.

I tried to quit smoking last Saturday, because I wanted to become a better man.

Although I couldn't quit it right away, I’ve reduced one-third.

I’m keeping away temptation that makes me want to smoke, and I hope that I will make it.

August 31, 2015