Elie
my camping trip My friends and I have a chat group in the WeChat. we talk almost everything in it. Last week one of my friends Ge came up an idea that is going outside to travel together and I was the one preparing for it. The most important thing is choosing a scenic spot. There are many conditions to consider such as money, train ticket, time and weather. After all the researches and discussion, we figure out an undeveloped spot named HouHe, which is almost 200 miles away. HouHe is known for its beautiful mountain and clear river. Hiking and Camping would be the core activities. Then I found a shop renting camping equipment for a fair price. Eventually we made a detail plan, which covered the food, route and other necessities. Note: this is my first article and I hope you guys help me improving it.
Aug 31, 2015 6:48 AM
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my camping trip

My Camping Trip

 

My friends and I have a chat group in the WeChat. wWe talk about almost everything in it.  Last week one of my friends, Ge, came up an idea that is to going outside to travel together, and I was the one to prepareing for it.

The most important thing is choosing a scenic spot. There are many conditions to consider such as money, train ticket, time, and weather. After all the researches and discussion, we figure out found an undeveloped spot named HouHe, which is almost 200 miles away. HouHe is known for its beautiful mountain and clear river. Hiking and Camping would be the core activities. Then I found a shop renting camping equipment for a fair price. Eventually we made a detail plan, which covered the food, route and other necessities.

Note: this is my first article and I hope you guys help me improving it.

September 1, 2015
Great article. Sounds like fun.
September 1, 2015
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