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Essay FCE Benefits of ageing population Notes 1. Caring for the elderly 2. Jobs 3. __________ (your own idea) Nowdays as result of a decisive improvement in lifestyle, people live longer than before. However the average age is massively increasing with its benefits and discomforts. Firstly, our work-centred society has perfectly accepted the previously mentioned change. In fact the elderly go on pension later than in the past, and are now occupying positions that could be available for youngsters instead. On the other hand, this makes the unemployment grow no stop. Another aspect is the national expense for their healthcare, due to the fact that more medicines are needed, and hospitals require more beds. In addition, new positions like the elderly-assistant are becoming popular worldwide. To sum up, we have to be grateful as individuals of this lenghtening because we can mantain our merories alive. Moreover everyone is taking advantages from an ageing population ranging from the pharmaceutic enterpreuners to the commerce of goods , for instance. What is more, it is evident that all has to be mainteined otherwise the chain could probably ripp.
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Essay FCE Benefits of ageing population

Notes
1. Caring for the elderly
2. Jobs
3. __________ (your own idea)

Nowadays, as result of a decisiveconsiderable improvement in lifestyle, people live longer than before. However, the average age is massivelygreatly increasing which haswith its benefits and discomfortsdisadvantages.

Firstly, our work-centered society has perfectly accepted the previously mentioned change. In fact, the elderly go on pension later than in the past, and are now occupying positions that could be available for youngersters workers instead. On the other hand, this makes the unemployment grow non-stop.

Another aspect is the national expense for their healthcare, due to the fact that more medicines are needed, and hospitals require more beds. In addition, new positions like that of the elderly-assistant are becoming popular worldwide.

To sum up, we have to be grateful as individuals ofor this lengthtening because we can mantainkeep our meroriesmemories alive. Moreover, everyone is taking advantages fromof an ageing population ranging from the pharmaceutic enterpreuners to the commerce of goods. , for instance.[C`è un problema con questa frasa in cui "commerce of goods" non va con "everyone."] What is moreIn addition, it is evident that all this has to be maintaeined otherwise the chain could probably rippbreak.

[Si può scrivere: "everyone is taking advantage of an ageing population, from the pharmaceutical entreprenuers to the traders of goods" o "to those involved in the commerce of goods."]

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