My presentation

Hi, my name is Daria I live in a town called Chiusi. It's a very small town but it is very nice with a long heritage. During the school year I live in Florence, the best city in Tuscany where I study fashion marketing. I like it very much because it is very interesting and there are many opportunities to work

 in my society. In a few days I will go to Africa for three weeks as a volunteer. I am very excited and   happy at the same time. I'll visit Nairobi and Mombasa and I will work in a orphanage. I chose this because it is very important for me to help and to make an effort in this situation and at the same time I can know a different country and learn new things.

P.S it's highly appreciated by me if you can correct my mistakes.

Hello Daria,

Remember that when you are talking about yourself doing an action it is always a capital (big) 'I'. You also have random capital letters where they are not needed.

I hope you find your experience in Africa rewarding.

Bob

My presentation

Hi, my name is Daria. I live in a town called Chiusi. It's a very little town, but is very nice with a long heritage. During the school I live in Florence, the best city of Tuscany. I study fashion marketing. I like it very much because it is very interesting and there are many job opportunities in my society. In a few days I will go to Africa for three weeks as a volunteer. I am very excited and the same happy. I'll visit Nairobi and Mombasa and I will work in an orphanage..I chose this because it is very important to me to help and the effort in this reality..and at the same time I can also know a different country and to learn new things.

P.S a corecction is highly appreciated by me if I have mistakes