My favourite book One of the best books I have read in my life is The Journey Home by Radhanath Swami. It is the autobiography of an American boy, who was hippie and became a monk. He tells about his

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My favourite book One of the best books I have read in my life is The Journey Home by Radhanath Swami. It is the autobiography of an American boy, who was hippie and became a monk. He tells about his journey from USA to Europe as a hippie, and later from Europe to India as a very wise young man. There are so many adventures, dangers and spiritual experience during his incredible journey. He went by auto stop through Greece, Turkey, Iran, Afganistan, Pakistan where he passed through many situations with hazard to life. Now he gives many interesting lectures all over the world. He is a very broadbrow and sincere person with amazing sense of humor.

Aug 31, 2015 8:17 PM

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My favourite book

One of the best books I have read in my life is The Journey Home by Radhanath Swami. It is the autobiography of an American boy, who was a hippie and became a monk. He tells about his journey from USA to Europe as a hippie, and later from Europe to India as a very wise young man. There are so many adventures, dangers and spiritual experiences during his incredible journey. He went by auto stop through Greece, Turkey, Iran, Afganistan, Pakistan where he passed through many life-threatening situations with hazard to life.

(<em>with hazard to life </em>is not an English idiom and sounds strange in English - the adjective life-threatening or hazardous/perilous is better)

Now he gives many interesting lectures all over the world. He is a very broadbrow and sincere person with amazing sense of humor.

Very little to improve here!

Your English is excellent. It sounds really natural and your use of tenses is very good. I don't know

"broadbrow" nor "auto stop".

August 31, 2015

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